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    醉花阴

                           醉花阴
     
     暖日青空方休冻,极目春犹长。东窗叹路远,鹊伴风香,河畔确花黄。

     楼上兰枝闻茶苦,望尽远山混。窗台不循久,一分寂寞,斜阳更些浓。
     
     
     
                        -- 阳历四月二日午后于望京单位有感而作。

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    佚名wrote:
          喜欢这阕词的意境,尤其是第二段的第一句,韵味尤浓。
                                                                  佛家菜鸟
    July 21
    Picture of Anonymous
    Simon wrote:
    我说老常啊,拽吧~~不过蛮有意境的啊,不错~~~
    Apr. 29
    flora zhouwrote:
    常常,你赔满口的牙!
    Apr. 29
    红儿 Annewrote:
    好久没进spaces了,看到了你的留言,才发现常老师还真是挺有才的,呵呵!
    这首诗我也很喜欢:一分寂寞,斜阳更些浓!
    Apr. 8
    Picture of Anonymous
    姐姐 wrote:
    大弟弟
    你还会写诗啊
    Apr. 6

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